my comment on the panel-2

I picked this one was because I think it was interesting to see how the building form was made. The use of diagrams was effective, clear and pertaining to a derivative sequence in the design process. I like the number of diagrams he/she used was just right, not too many. Each of the diagrams is telling one specific step of the design process. However, I think this kind of diagrams is quite subjective and perhaps difficult to convince all the viewers, so I think it would be good if he/she has done enough research to support this idea.

Besides, the choice of colours in this panel was good. It clearly indicates different parts and ideas and I also like the circulation diagram. It was interesting for me as previously when I thought about expressing ideas of circulation, I could only think of doing isometric diagrams, but now I know sectional diagrams can also work very well. However I think the choice of route being shown in the diagram should be very careful, since it maybe subjective in showing the intention of the designer; it needs to be strong enough to convince viewers.